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Jim Proser's avatar

Love you but too much detail too fast. Make it simple, clear, precise and always conclude with a call to action. Link to congresspeople. Integrate with Bannon's Warroom "Bill Blaster" via Grace Chung at that group. Good job but slow down, use more space, pick one clear point and drive it home. Write for an eighth grader.

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madlibtweets's avatar

Big fan of your writing generally, but I think you might be overcomplicating this. Aside from legacy, non-minority kids have few angles to overcome the DEI headwinds in college admissions. Ergo, non-minority parents are rational in investing like crazy in their kids' athletics (school facilities, travel teams, high-performance camps, etc.). Upper class non-minorities just focused on admissions, and middle/lower class non-minorities hoping for some scholarship money (i.e. they view the sports as an investment). We all know the white kid with straight A's, 1600 SATs etc. and zero noteworthy athletics ain't getting in to Harvard, but white kid who's nationally ranked in squash and got 1450 probably will. There's a straight line of causation on the sports emphasis back to affirmative action.

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